Short answer = No.
Slightly longer answer = it will work a little, but nowhere near as well as want it to.
Mate, whatever kind of dust extraction you want, I can be sure someone will sell it to you all proven and ready to use. It might cost more than your two cardboard toilet rolls and a piece of sticky backed plastic though
Example;- My wife has a pyrography set. The burning wood smells and some woods can give off harmful fumes right under her nose and mouth. I was looking at making some kind of smoke hood and she spent 5 minutes online and found a custom made portable 6" square mains powered fan that not only sucks the fumes away, it has a carbon impregnated sponge to absorb them as well. Job done, move along the bus please.
Re inventing the wheel is never a rewarding job.
Chuck, my comment on the pipe sizes; It was low pressure gas in the pipes, so flow resistance had to be factored in. Every single fitting and per foot of pipe run had its own resistance / friction chart hence the much higher number of pipes in my example (although it might not have actually been 16
